Journal Poll - A Midnight Clear

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For those of you who have read the first two chapters of my story, A Midnight Clear, I would like some feedback from you guys.  What do you think of it?  Am I doing a good job with it so far?

But most of all, is there anything I can do to improve upon my skills as a writer?  Feel free to critique me as you like.  I know that there is far more to being an author of fiction than meets the eye.  If any of you have any advice for me not as an anime artist, but as a writer, please share it with me.  I will be more than happy to take it to heart.

Until next time,

Meli :iconespeon-plz:
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SabakuNoShi's avatar
In my opinion it's good :)